Magic and math and balance and Charlie. And Charlie in Oz. With Dorothy. I love the way she was pulled across, a piece of her soul still in Oz. I loved the imagery, the beautiful colors of The Emerald City. I loved the Oz history that you elaborated on for us. I loved the little hints that Rowena knew something.
This had the best elements of an epic fantasy novel, in 5000 words and I feel that I should write a really, really long comment singing its praises, but I'm kind of stuck on 'wow' and 'awesome' right now! :) Just...fabulous.
Also, I hope you don't mind, I'm adding you to my flist, because I just realised we're not 'friends' and I honestly thought we already were! :\
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Date: 2015-05-25 11:55 am (UTC)Magic and math and balance and Charlie. And Charlie in Oz. With Dorothy. I love the way she was pulled across, a piece of her soul still in Oz. I loved the imagery, the beautiful colors of The Emerald City. I loved the Oz history that you elaborated on for us. I loved the little hints that Rowena knew something.
This had the best elements of an epic fantasy novel, in 5000 words and I feel that I should write a really, really long comment singing its praises, but I'm kind of stuck on 'wow' and 'awesome' right now! :) Just...fabulous.
Also, I hope you don't mind, I'm adding you to my flist, because I just realised we're not 'friends' and I honestly thought we already were! :\